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Anonymous The man 2025/05/04(Sun) 20:42:25 GMT No. 16538
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>its night
>heard something from the window
>i look at the window
>before i looked away, i saw someone run really fast
>i grab my pistol and cocks it
>i keep my pistol with me
>i look out in the window, until i saw a black figure...
>i close my eyes
>he's gone..
>i heard something in the living room
>i decide to go to the living room
>nobody is there..
>until i heard something screeching
>then it became silent for a moment
>until i saw the man looking out at my window
>i shot his right eye
>he fell down and disapeared
>i heard a demonic scream from him
>he came back
>he broke my other window in my bedroom
>until i saw him..staring at me.
>i shot him in his hand
>he is still standing, coming close to
>i shot him in the stomach
>i decide to run away and leave the house
>he begins to start running after me
>i was running for my life
>i was starting to get tired
>so i decide to hide somewhere
>until the moment of silence
>he was behind me
>he begins choking me
>i try to shoot him, but im out of ammo
>i try punching him to make him stop choking me
>he threw me to the ground
>i was unconsious
>he drags me to the forest
>then, he starts eating me.

part 2 coming soon.

Anonymous 2025/05/04(Sun) 20:50:58 GMT No. 16541
i worked hard on this btw

Anonymous 2025/05/04(Sun) 21:46:01 GMT No. 16542
i liked it until you start running out of the house, i think it would be a better horror story if you were either trapped in your house or, better yet, unwilling to leave the house because it's safer than outside
it would also be better if it wasn't entirely made of quotes

Anonymous 2025/05/05(Mon) 02:16:02 GMT No. 16543
>then, he starts eating me out.
fixed

Anonymous 2025/05/05(Mon) 11:21:40 GMT No. 16544
>>16542
no worries, there will be a part 2 :3

Anonymous 2025/05/05(Mon) 14:36:13 GMT No. 16546
>>16538
https://www.youtube.com/shorts/jQvrGxBGl-4

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